SuperFakeFilms's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Good Idea; Bad Idea Part2]

Is...Okay

needs...
to be longer
backgrounds
not a continuation of something you never did in the first place

Has...
good stick animation...but still a stick animation
something...I'm bored I'm leaving.

[Cell Vs. Bacteria : Edit]

Herk Pleh!

make them look like cells, and have the white blood cell use platlets as weapons, or wait is it platlets or anti-bodies? whatever!

The red cells could be like inocent civilians and the white cells protec... I think that's already been done.

My constructive criticism: come up with something else.

[Amy & Friends]

Improvement...

you could start by spelling "one" correctly

ElsonWong-Darkspeeds responds:

Thank you for your feedback SuperFakeFilms. Please understand that this is my fist day here in Newgrounds.com and having recieved a mixed bag of feedback from a foreign site is new experience for me.

Could you please clarify what you meant by the number? I checked the animation test again and I don't quite understand what you mean... ^^;; I don't see a problem with my spelling on the intro and ending. It would be cool to see where you got this mistake from. *thumbs up*

[Imaginative Kids V2.0]

BACKGROUND MUCH??!!

you need to at least make the walls grey, but no white for crying out loud

Also, more audio regulation

other than that it was really good

[Funny S.W.A.T. Moves]

Funny stuff...pilgrim

That was hilarious! especially some of the ones at the bottom

[Red Riding Hood]

Quite accurate

that's the same version I heard, except the last like ten seconds

[penguin's day out]

Evil Penguins

Ha excelent! Penguins are evil, and so they must be destroyed!!

also it was funny

[Dragonball X EP1 Invasion]

Background.

you need backdrops of sky color, and sometimes that radom darkness when people are thinking like in the show...

but more importantly, you need them to talk. I hate word bubbles, you can have word bubbles while they're talking, but words alone gets annoying. And all new people do it.

the white background ends up in blamville alot, best of luck to you though it was rather good animation, though I don't like parodies much.

fadedshadow responds:

Actually, i used a very light sky-blue for the sky, but yeah i see wat u mean

[Mr. Toast: Episode 01]

Interesting

very unique background style, but your characters really need development.

Also, how did he take a taxi from the Chzech Republic to somewhere in Northern America, by going throu Australia?

I like that song

Hoogiman responds:

Wigglytuff has written a poem for you.

Wig Wiggly Wig, (Roses are Red)
Wig Iggly ig Wig, (Violets are Blue)
Wiggly Wig. (Tables are not the best kind of thing to try and eat)

That is a class poem there, my friend.

[Neturi's short flash]

pretty good

it had some good animation for the charater, but that bottle sucked

also it didn't really make sense, is the bottle full of laxitive or something?

and third of all Water Closet?! come on dude who honestly call it that?